译者在翻译某些句子的时候一定下了很多功夫,但很多语句让人感觉拗口,有时候还会都不懂。有一句意思为“让他能够”的句子翻成了“俾能”这种太过于书面化的表达在毛姆这种以对话体著称的作品中显得格格不入。
还有一些句子明显就是生硬的直译了。举个简单的例子,有一句话翻译为“大海在这上面很起作用”,其实作者想表达“大海和这个情况十分相似”。这样的例子比比皆是。
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